Angel of Death

I'm hooked. I love this!!! My favorite part was when Nicholas told Charlie that they didn't have a heartbeat or that they didn't need to breathe. Charlie's reaction was so ...

I love this. The lion's den could be the metaphor for love's cave. I mean love is a deep, dark emotion sometimes and it can be dangerous. Until you see ...

If you value the life of a fellow writer please continue this. I really want to know if Tom is going to help those people escape the clutches of the ...

Honestly I only skimmed through this :oops: but I caught the boy's message and that was very touching. A writer needs to have those type of moments.

wow I loved this!!! This is better, I mean I really really want to read more. Emily's dad is such a jerk...well anyways keep writing you're doing great. You portrayed ...

I like the way you started strong and ended strong. It was like a small book where I got everything I needed to know. I could picture a black and ...

Hey BBB!!! Well I loved this but yet there was one little problem. I am a girl and I think that if I were this girl I wouldn't go around ...

Raven i am: in love i wonder: if you notice you got me hypnotized i hear: your voice when I close my eyes i see: you in my dreams i ...

This was really gentle, and beautiful but I felt as if the two characters were too perfect. I mean their personalities seemed too rushed. Maybe if you told us about ...

If I could write a billion words to describe this short story, I'd say it was beautiful, deep, brilliant, heartwarming...I mean wow, there is so many words I can use ...

Who ever this girl is they are lucky to have a great poet like you. I mean this poem was so romantic that you could tell you really meant everything ...

Okay this I would say is very creative. I don't know what other's are saying but when I read this I could picture so many things in my head. It ...

Really I don't think this was emo at all!! As I read this I almost could picture this person. If you ever seen Tim Burton's A Nightmare Before Christmas I ...

Hey this is Summer, you've critiqued some of my writings. Well I loved this description of you story because I didn't read it. Lo Siento!!! but it sounds like it'll ...

I really didn't read the whole thing. :oops: But I really liked some of the things I scanned. For example the content was really nice. A word of advice DesperateRomantic, ...